Showing posts with label when. Show all posts
Showing posts with label when. Show all posts

Saturday, May 23, 2009

Finnally feeling up to posting again

So I am finally starting to feel like myself again. I am still in some pain, but it goes away after I take tylenol or ibuprofen. I get my stitches out on Tuesday and then I will hopefully really feel like myself. So here is the rivised version of Shine Like a Star.

Shine Like a Star

Shine like a star no matter who you are!

Be brave;
 Stand tall.
Face your problems big or small.
Belive in your dreams in order to achieve.

Shine like a star no matter where you are!

Fly up to the sky.
Be yourself and soar high.
Play your music; 
Never be queit.
Be all you can be.

Shine like a star no matter who or where you are!

Kayla Goodwin
May 23, 2009

So like I have stated before this poem book is full of revisions. It is something I wish I had continued, but never did. I always revise some poems more than others, but there are those that I just write and ignore. I think that is why I am so glad I started this blog. I am aware that it is not a popular blog, but now I am realizing that being popular is not important. I don't want to be popular, I just want to accomplish my goal. I think that is more important. So anyway here is the new poem. 


When the Sun Comes

When the sun comes back out,
Then maybe I won't cry at night.
When the sun comes back out,
Then maybe there will be joy again.

When the sun comes back out,
Then maybe I will sing.
When the sun comes back out,
Maybe I will laugh more.

When the sun comes back out,
Then my life will be changed.
When the sun comes back out,
Then your face I will see.

But only when the sun comes!

Kayla Goodwin
January 7, 2004
I will try to post tomorrow or Monday. Until then keep on writing. 

Thursday, May 14, 2009

New Notebook

So I have finished the last notebook. So on to another. I don't know if this the very next one I started, I highly doubt it, but at least I know I started this one when I was in 8th grade. So at least it is somewhat in chronological order. 

So here is the revised version of the last poem.


The Journey

I have traveled this road before.
Its path is well trodden.
I know how to get back home.
This is a familiar experience,
Yet does that make it right?

I have climbed this mountain before,
I have reached the peak many times.
I know where to put my feet and hands.
This is a familiar experience,
Yet does that make it right?

I have never seen this road before.
Its path is rough and rocky.
I am far away from home, I'm lost!
It is a new challenge,
Yet does that make it right?.

I have never climbed this mountain.
The peak seems so high.
I can't find footholds and handholds.
This is a new challenge,
Yet does that make it right?

What makes an experience worth while?
Is it one you have already had?
Or a new one?
What is correct?
What is a journey?

Kayla Goodwin
May 14, 2009

So here is the first entry of the notebook. This notebook has 170 poems. A long time ago I gathered all my poetry notebooks and counted all the poems I had. I then wrote how many were in each one and so this one has 170. So we may be on this notebook for a while. Of course I may not revise all of them. There are some I can't do because it is hard enough to read them. Some of the poems in here were written when I was going through a tough time in my life and I don't think they should be revised anyway. They are to emotional to touch. 

So anyway here is the first poem. 



When Spring Comes

When spring comes the flowers bloom,the birds sing and gone is gloom. 
When spring comes the snow fades, out come the tress and the cool shade.
When spring comes winter is gone, here in the night and gone with the dawn.
When spring comes the sun shines, over the lakes and in the mines.

When springs it seems as if you could fly, with the birds in the sky.
When spring comes your worries fade, as you sit in the cool shade.
When spring comes the music plays, it starts at the bigging of the first day.
When spring comes sit in the cool shade, and listen to natures music play.

Kayla Goodwin
January 1, 2003